Hell’s Nest 2
Written by Goddy
* Author’s Note.*
Two days ago.
[ Before Jordan’s accident ]
A girl and a boy is spotted in a room fighting. The girl was dark and pretty , she dress in a red spaghetti strap dress and her blonde haircut was perfectly tinted.
” You’re so fucked up.” She yelled.
” Danielle you can’t talk to me like that , I love you and you know that you can’t continue to under estimate me.” The boy said.
” So who the fuck are you ? I gave you everything, you’re just one wretched motherfucka , you’re a thief. You steal just to make me love you. Do you know the embarrassment you’ve caused me , Rayne answer , I’m done with you , if you’re not willing to change then don’t ever call me again.” She said and walked out angrily.
” God , that bitch is so silly. She don’t even care about me. Fine I steal but who give a fuck. I need to smoke with Toni.” Rayne said and walk out.
After having a fight with her boyfriend rayne she went home really angry. Her mother and twin sister was at the living room laughing to nothing in particular. Her twin sister Danni seems to be the family’s favourite.
But who cares , she loves her boyfriend and best friend. They were her favourite.
” Danielle, where are you coming from ?” Her mom questioned.
” From Rayne.” She replied.
” You and that lazy son. He’s a mistake to humanity.” Her mom scolded.
” Mom please stop, the fact that you don’t like me doesn’t mean you have to hate my boyfriend too. Just leave me alone and concentrate on your precious daughter.” She yelled.
” Danielle..” Danni called.
” Oh shut up , you pile of trash.” Danielle fired back.
” What ! I won’t take another insult from you, who do you even think you are ?” Danni said standing up.
” I’m gonna beat your ass so bad. Just go fuck yourself.” Danielle said and stormed out.
” You fight too much with your sister and I don’t like it .” Her mom scolded.
” She started it. She’s just one annoying asshole.” Danni defended.
” It’s still doesn’t matter. She’s your older sister.”
” And dad’s favorite.” Danni said and sat down.
” She would never leave that boy alone. Rayne has no future.” Her mom said and walk into the kitchen.
* Present Day *
” Who’s the family of this girl ? She’s not breathing.” The cops asked looking around.
” We can’t abandoned her here and we can’t take her to the mortuary either.” The cops said.
Just then father Adam , Jordan’s parish priest walk in. He gasped and rushed at Jordan who was lifeless.
” What happened to her ?” The priest ask no one in particular.
” She was involved in a fatal accident.”
” Oh no my child. I’ve brought a solution you can’t just join your mother.” The father cried.
He lifted Jordan and took her to the back of his car. Another man who looks like an exorcist assisted him and they drove away.
* Danielle writes *
” You know it’s so weird with the way Capetown is turning into a dead zone . ” Harmony said.
” What happened ?” I asked.
” A girl just passed away. She had an accident. And she’s beautiful and too innocent and young.” Harmony said stretching a news paper to me.
I collected it and read the headline.
” This life is a bitch.” I said and threw the newspaper inside a refuse bin.
” What’s up with Rayne ?” Harmony asked.
The mention of Rayne wanna make me puke. He’s one annoying bastard. I sighed and sat down.
” Basketball practice is in a bit , I wanna concentrate.” I said.
” Danielle you can’t just walk out of a relationship because he’s a fuckin thief. Four years Danielle, you’ve dated Rayne for four years , this isn’t the time to dump him just like that.” Harmony said.
” Yeah. He needs to work on his habit. I’m tired of fuckin a motherfucka all in the name of love. I can’t , he lied to me , he said he was gonna change. Now look at him , he had to rob a woman just because he wanted to please me.” I said and sighed.
I was getting fed up of Rayne. He’s my boyfriend. Our relationship started in high school , Rayne was brilliant and very nice so I thought. He was just a hypocrite , a liar. I found out when it was matric , final year in high school. I couldn’t help but cried , he promised he was gonna change and I forget about it.
I went to college and it went worse , most times I think he was under a spell. He was always giving excuses, ‘ If I don’t steal how on Earth I’m I gonna take care of you, how I’m I going to take care of me too. Even my mom.’ that’s always is excuse.
He wasn’t opportune to go to college. He said he was planning to and he needed more money. Who does that ? I tried to work out several times but it’s not easy to abandoned a relationship when there’s still love.
He was more than a boyfriend , he is my best friend including Harmony. We went to high school together. They know best how to confront me when my mom start to act like a pussy.
I have a twin with the name Danni. She was just like my mom so frustrating. Danni is always right and I’m always wrong . I was the bad egg. When my dad was alife , I was his favorite. He said I was always hard working and that’s true. My mom always want me to do everything in my house. I just hated both of them.
And now Rayne with his frustrating attitude. I sighed and turned to look at Harmony who was already frowning.
” Look why don’t you date Rayne since you like him a lot.” I said.
” He’s your boyfriend Elle.”
” I don’t give a fuck. He’s a swine.” I said and sighed.
Few minutes after , vane and her bestie walk in. Vane was college favourite , ugly black bitch with a horrible boyfriend. She was as stupid as Danni . She entered the basketball court and sit close to me and Harmony.
” Someone is used again. The ugly bitch with a horrible boyfriend.” Vane said in a mocking manner.
” What did you say ?” Harmony asked.
She Chuckled and stand up.
” Danielle you’re a loose bitch , your boyfriend is horrible just like your pussy, bitch deal with that.” She said and her friend burst out laughing.
I looked around and winked at Harmony. She knew what I wanted to do to her. I hate shit !
I picked up an empty drink bottle and left it on her head.
” What the fuck ?” Her friend questioned and I gave her slap.
” I’m sorry.” She pleaded.
Vane was already bleeding.
” And you ..” I said turning to vane.
” I’m not your mate and I will never be one. Take your ass and get the fuck outta here.” I ordered.
” You’ll pay .” She stammers.
I threatened her with the already broken bottle and she took to her heels.
” You made her miss practice.” Harmony said collecting the bottle from my hand and threw it in the trash can.
” She deserves it.” I said.
Danni entered with her friends and she waved at me . I look at her and scoff.
” Always acting as if my dad owns a G wagon or probably a Royce Jeep. She’s fuckin broke.” I said and Harmony laughs.
” Oh my God. You guys are crazy. Cheryl is here , time to practice.” Harmony said and gave me a hands up.
I stood up and we walked to meet the others.
* GISELLE *
I heard the news and I could barely believe it. The priest visited and I couldn’t help but cry.
” It’s okay. ” He console.
” You need to get well soon.” He added.
” I can’t believe Jordan is dead.” I said on my sick bed.
The priest sighed and shake his head reluctantly.
” Where’s her body ?”
” It’s in the loop close to your house. I lay her there. What about Melissa ?”
” A bit better.”
” I heard something bad happened to her lover or something. He’s in bad fate now. They share the same blood. He must be in the same condition with Jordan.” The priest said and I cried slowly.
” Easy alright. The exorcist said , she’s not fully dead but it’s 50/50 . She might survive or she might definitely die . Jordan is not breathing , she’s been held captive. She may end up dead in her dreams including her boyfriend.”
” She’s not breathing and she’s sleeping.”
” It happens. You need to get well soon. The exorcist choose to speak with you once you’re getting better. ” The priest said and left.
God what a disaster , Jordan can’t end like her mom . She has a brighter future ahead. I cried and tried to console myself. My arm she stabbed is still hurting badly.
* DANIELLE *
The basketball practice was horrible. Danni was just too annoying. I tried to defend the ball from entering the net when she purposely kicked my legs and made me fall to the ground.
” For real ?” Harmony asked lifting me up.
” Sorry that wasn’t intentional.” Danni said and grin.
” Guys no need to freak out . Recess start immediately. Go freshen up.” Cheryl said.
Danni winked at me and mocked.
” Asshole.” She whispered.
I got angry and kicked her stomach. She fell to the ground and groan.
” Bitch.” I said.
” What’s that for ?” Cheryl asked.
” You’re gonna pay.” Danni said wanting to fight back.
I punched her mouth and she fell to the ground unconscious.
Hell’s Nest 2
Written by Goddy
* DANIELLE *
” Danielle what was that for ?” Cheryl fired.
” I can’t explain anything to you alright, she’s my sister and it’s our business.” I said a bit paranoid.
” Really ? You’re suspended.”
” Cool , I’m out.” I said and walk out.
” I’m out too.” Harmony said and ran after me.
” Harmony you’re suspended too.” Cheryl shouted.
” Who cares ? Life’s a bitch you just need to learn how to fuck it.” Harmony replied.
” Mouth breather.” Harmony whispered to me and I chuckled.
” You shouldn’t have , she’s your sister.” Harmony said on our way home.
” Maybe , who cares ?” I said and frowned.
My phone rang and it was Rayne.
” What do you want ?” I asked on the phone.
” Elle I’m sorry.” Rayne said on the phone.
” Like I care. Look stop calling me okay , go sort your shit out.” I said and ended the call.
” We are gonna beef if you keep acting like that towards Rayne. You should forgive him , he’s sorry.” Harmony said and i scoff.
” He’s still a thief.”
” And you still love him ?”
” I don’t care.” I said silently.
Harmony growled and I ignored her. Rayne should be my last worries , I needed to focus on school issues.
” You’re going home ?”
” No I’m going home with you. I’m so stressed out.”
” Cool.” Harmony replied and walk ahead of me.
” Seriously , you’re taking this Rayne issues too far. It’s my relationship and not yours .”
” Yeah I think.” Harmony said and scoff.
” Fuck you ” I said and pricked her.
” Ouch , you’re insane.” She said and Chuckle.
” You’re crazy.” I said and laughs.
” Look I don’t want you to worry about Rayne and i, we know how best to settle issues.” I said and she sighed.
” Well yeah. I just like him for you despite the fact that he’s a thief. You shouldn’t blame him he has to , this is south Africa every one’s managing.”
” Fuck yeah.” I said and sighed.
* GISELLE *
Few days after, I was discharged but Melissa was still admitted. My arm was bandaged and supported by my shoulders.
I was at my house , I visited Christian and he was not improving just like Jordan. He was kept in his room, he was sharing same fate as Jordan.
” I’m sorry mrs Smith.” I said.
” You don’t have to , I don’t even know if he will survive. Most times I think I have just one son. If anything happens to Christian I’ll kill myself.” Mrs Smith said and cried.
I held her with my only available hand and consoled her.
” I’m sorry , we will try our best. Jordan’s not improving too , I just hope we don’t loose her.” I said and she nodded.
” The exorcist said we should find a bracelet your sister is wearing.”
” What exorcist ?”
” The one I brought , he said we should get it.”
” I will talk to my priest.” I said and smiled at her.
” Melissa’s fate is in the hands of God. She’s still breathing with an oxygen.” Mrs Smith said and I sighed deeply.
” I’m praying for her. I missed her alot.” I said and cried.
” I’ll take my leave.” I said.
” Alright , take care.”
I hugged her and left. I went home and the priest visited.
” Giselle.” He called.
” Welcome father.”
” I brought someone.” He said and another man walks in.
” He’s an exorcist.”
” Hi , I’m Giselle.” I introduced.
” Nice to meet you Giselle, I’m James an exorcist. I’m sorry about your sisters condition.”
” It’s fine , we are hoping on God.” I said and forced a chuckle.
” Please sit .” I said and we all sat down.
” Jordan once wear a bracelet. We need it. ”
” Alright. The priest said her body is in the loop. We could check it out , it’s in her wrist but can’t be removed.” I said and they nodded.
” Let’s go then.” James said and we left for the back of my house.
I opened the door and switched on the light. That place is abandoned, the priest has to create a space for Jordan to be laid .
We entered and saw Jordan’s body sitting up instead of lying down.
” That’s weird.” I said standing afar from her body .
We saw a black Shadow passed through the sunlight.
” A demon was here. She’s caged and held captive by him. She’s been tormented, we pray she survive.” The exorcist said.
The priest held Jordan and lay her body back.
” The bracelet is not here.” Father Adam said.
” That’s not possible , it can’t just disappear without being removed. And also you can’t take it off.” I said.
” Then where is it ?” The exorcist asked.
” I have no idea.” I said.
” Me neither.” I said and sighed.
” Let’s leave.” The exorcist said and we left switching off the light.
” Who took it ?”
” Can I ask why it’s so important.”
” Jordan is being possessed by Alaster, a demon of nemesis. He’s the second son of the devil. He wanted to overthrow his father Lucifer and he was cast out of hell and caged in that bracelet.”
” Jesus. Then how on Earth did Jordan’s mom get it ?” I asked surprised.
” It was washed ashore. I’m really sure that’s how her mom got it and maybe gifted it to her young daughter. We need to find it , whosoever that’s in possession of that may never survive and passed through Jordan’s fate. ” The exorcist said and I sighed.
” God , how can we find who took it ?”
” That’s your job , we might help you too.”
” Cape town is large , where on Earth are we gonna find it ?”
” Seek deeper my dear. I’ll take my leave. And one more thing tie this cross in the door of where Jordan’s body lies. It will stop whatever incoming spirit.” He said and gave me the cross.
” Thanks.” I said and collected it.
” You’re always welcome.” James said standing up.
” Father I shall take my leave.” James said and the priest saw him off.
I’m getting scared more , the story behind that bracelet is crazy.
I took my computer and login. I searched about a pearl bracelet if I was ever gonna come across whatever thing Jordan was wearing.
” A London museum is willing to buy a pearl bracelet for 300 million dollars…” I read out .
” Why will someone buy death for such amount ?” I ask myself.
” Crazy assholes. Maybe we need to market this stuff to London once I find it.” I said and got up.
I tied the cross at the door post of the loop and left.
” Dear lord please save her.”
* JORDAN *
I opened my eyes and look around , everywhere was void. I tried to move my feet and I was electrocuted. I scream and looked at my feet.
My feet was chained including my arms.
” Where I’m i ?” I asked looking around.
I saw different young girls , about fifty of them dead.
” Jordan. ” A voice called.
” I know you. You brought me here. Let me leave please..” I cried.
He laughs in a mocking manner , I don’t even know when I started crying.
” You shall die. Your sister is struggling in vain. If she’s wise she will live on , but your family loves you a lot. Poor darling..” he said and continued to laugh.
” Let me go.”
” Look over there.. At your front. Look beyond.” He said.
I did look beyond, but I couldn’t see anything.
” Look beyond you.” He whispered.
” Christian…” I called and cried.
” He’s not awake , sleeping in my world. He’s in a verge of death. ” He laughs and disappeared.
I cried and look at Christian afar from where I was chained, he wasn’t awake. He was tied to the dark. I wailed and called out to him, it was in vain.
I look opposite me , a woman was also chained to the dark. She bowed her head and cried in a Latin language.
She raised her head and half of her face was missing.
” Mom.” I called and move my hand and got electrocuted again. It seems I always loose blood each time I’m electrocuted. I looked downwards and saw my own blood flowing around.
” You die once your blood is exhausted.” My mom said.
” Mom…” I cried.
” I’m sorry Jordan. I owe you a lot of apologies. I gave you that evil bracelet.” Mom cried.
” It doesn’t matter now.” I said.
” How did you get it ?” I asked.
” It was washed ashore. I went out with giselle’s mom. I saw it and took it home.” Mom said and cried.
” I’m giving up , I might not even last up to a minute. My blood is everywhere. This is hell , we are doomed. I might…” Mom said but was short by a sword that appeared from the dark , it beheaded her. Her blood splash all over my body and I scream.
* RAYNE *
” Rayne !” Toni called
” Seriously , you can be crazy at times. What’s up with you ?” I ask.
” I just saw this .” He said bringing out a bracelet out of my bag.
” Where did you get this from ?” He asked and I dragged it from his hands.
” Shut your mouth. Danielle hates me because I’m not capable. She sees me as a waste. I need to prove to her that i still love her.”
” So ? This shit’s a million dollars. Where did you get it from ?”
” The girl who died on September 12. ”
” I think she own it ,it fell off from her wrist and I took it. ”
” What ! Rayne you can’t be serious. You need to sell this , it will put a stop to all our problems.”
” Yeah I know. But I need to win Danielle’s love back. I’m giving it to her ”
” You won’t do that.” Toni said .
” Of course I will.”
” Rayne this is a rare gem. it’s a pearl, you need to sell it.” Toni insisted.
” I will sell it, but I want Elle to have it first. I truly missed her.”
” You’re not normal , I’m out of here.” Toni said and stormed out.
” For real ? Niggas being mad, like it’s his relationship. Fuck off.” I said and walk out.
Hell’s Nest 2
The devil is back
® Author Goddy
* DANIELLE *
I left Harmony’s house that evening and went home. Mom was braiding Danni’s hair.
” What a stupid bond.” I said to my self.
I pretend to not see them and proceed to my room.
” Elle.” Mom called.
I sighed and turned to look at them.
” What is wrong with you lately ?” Mom asked.
” Nothing is wrong with me .”
” Did you have to fight with Danni ? She’s your sister for crying out loud.”
” Yeah I get it and she’s your favourite daughter. I’m trying to discipline her since you can’t.” I said.
Mom got up and gave me a slap.
” Get out of my sight.” Mom said.
Danni smiled and grin. I touched my cheek and walk out. I hate my mom , most times I doubt if I’m really Danni’s twin. What kind of a mother will treat her daughters separately all in the name of choices.
The following morning I took my bath and hurried to school. I didn’t bother to eat breakfast cause it’s not important. Harmony was outside my house waiting for me.
I smiled and she embraced me.
” I can’t wait to graduate and possibly get a job and move out .” I said on our way to school.
” Me too. I wanna travel out , to Mexico maybe or Seattle.” Harmony said and i chuckle.
” I guess your mom had to scold you after having a fight with Danni.”
” Yeah. She slapped me.” I said remembering last night incident.
” Sorry about that. I think her reasons for being hard on you it’s because you’re not willing to be amongst them.”
” No I’m not sure and same time I don’t care.” I said.
We already arrived school , we made a turn to our class . Danni was standing on top of a desk and talking to the other students.
” I’m throwing a party tonight at my house and I want you all to come. There will food , drinks and especially girls and cute boys .” Danni said and class cheered her.
” My home , I remember the last time I decide to throw a party, my mom grounded me for a week and now she’s helping Danni gain popularity in school.” I said.
” Oops bummer. Danni is planning to contest for Miss Princeton, your enemy vane is her competition. Vane is among the most popular girls in school , you might wanna check that out.” Harmony said turning to look at a direction.
I followed her gaze and saw Hugo coming to our spot.
” Hey pretty.” He said and we smiled.
” Hi..” I said.
He’s one of the best student in statistics. Handsome and team leader of raquetball. He’s crazy and shy , most times I wished he was Rayne. No matter the offence Rayne committed towards me, I just can’t let him go.
Hugo is Danni’s big time crush , she can kill to be his side chic , including Vane. Vane is the girlfriend of popular school’s basketball player, he is so horrible. His attitude stinks just like his stupid girlfriend vane.
” She’s not better than you ” Hugo whispered referring to Danni who was already staring at us.
I chuckled and smiled.
” Thanks.” I managed to say.
” You might wanna hang out tonight.” He said.
” At where ?”
” THE SPOT will be okay. I’ll come pick you up , party by 7.” He said and pricked my waist before walking out.
” That was fab.” Harmony said and Chuckle.
She actually excused us before walking back.
” You’re going out with Hugo ?”
” I don’t know. I think that’s a great idea to let rayne out of my head.”
” You can flirt but please don’t date him alright. Rayne has a good spirit.”
” Same with Hugo.”
” You can’t do that.” Harmony said and we sat down.
” He has a car and a future.”
” You’re just saying this to hurt yourself. Rayne took away your virginity and i think that’s the crazy bond stuff reasons you can’t just let him go.” Harmony said and i sighed.
” Lord have mercy.” I said bringing out my textbook.
” You can’t have Hugo. His girlfriend is Matilda , a girl out of your class. She school’s abroad and i believe every social media freak must have come across her on Instagram.” Danni said frowning at me.
Harmony look at me and we mock her in unison.
” I believe you just made that up.” Harmony said and we laugh again.
Danni was silent for a minute.
” You’re stoked Danni. Look mom’s not here to protect you , take your shameful ass and get out of here.” I said laughing.
” I get it. You know , no matter how hard you try to get recognize you can’t. You’ll always be a looser from birth.” Danni said and grin.
” I believe nose surgery is way too expensive now. I’m just gonna pretend I didn’t hear you except you want your nose to be fixed.” I said preparing to punch her hard.
” Am I supposed to run away ?”
” You don’t have to.” I said.
I proceed to give her a blow when Harmony held me back.
” Get outta here.” Harmony shouted.
” Loosers.” Danni said and left.
” I just hate her.”
” You shouldn’t get paranoid. You should be prepared about tonight.” Harmony said and i smiled.
” I guess.”
I said and sighed. A night out with Hugo could possibly save my ass out of Rayne.
* GISELLE *
” I’m tired , where on Earth I’m gonna start my search from ? Who took it , who fuckin stole it ?” I lamented.
Melissa got discharged that morning and I was in her house trying to help her out. She was in her bathroom bathing when someone knocked on her door.
” Hold on I’m coming.” I said running downstairs.
I open her door and saw Mrs Smith with a guy.
” For real ?” I said in my thoughts.
” Hi G.” He greeted.
” Is Melissa in ?” Mrs Smith asked.
” Yeah , do come in.” I said and turned to look at the guy again.
” She’s taking her bath, I’ll go get her.” I said and rushed out.
I entered Melissa’s room and she was getting dressed.
” Mrs Smith is here to see you.” I said and smiled
” Why are you smiling ?” She asked surprised.
” Jason is here too.” I whispered.
” What ?” She gasped.
” Yeah , and he’s really looking cute.”
” That’s a lie.”
” You might wanna check it out.” I said.
” Alright.. I’m nervous. I just came out of a dreadful accident and my ex is here to see me. I feel like puking.”
” You don’t have to .” I said and pulled her out.
” Take it easy on me , I’m not that fine.”
” I know. Don’t forget I have just one hand.” I said as we climbed down the stairs.
Jason was sitting a bit close to his mom and he was busy going through his phone.
” Welcome Mrs Smith.” She said weakly and turned to look at Jason who was lost in checking her out.
Alright this part two stuff has to do with Jordan and some more romance stuff just joined in the game. Melissa smiled at Jason and finally sat down.
” Hi Mel. You’re not looking bad.” He said.
” You too , you’re not looking bad either.” Melissa said and twist her hand like a high school girl. I was forced to smack her hand.
” How are you ? Hope you’re feeling better? I was really glad when I heard you have been discharged. Thank God you’re okay.” Mrs Smith said and Melissa nodded smiling.
” Thanks ma.”
” So how did all this happened ?” Jason asked.
” I barely can tell. ” I said.
” I heard you have a kid sister ? And my brother had to fall in love with her ?” Jason asked and i nodded.
” This is weird. I was really scared and I had to rush down to Africa. We need to do something about all this.” Jason said.
” Yeah , the exorcist said we need to look for the bracelet Jordan once wear. It holds the life of each of it’s victim and it’s missing.”
” So what’s the name of this demon ?” Jason asked.
” Alaster , a demon of nemesis. He’s the second son of Lucifer.” I said and a strong wind blew.
We looked around and saw a shadow that traveled pass .
” This is second edition , only the wise will survive. We need to be extra careful and mindful. We all are devout Catholic and we believe in one faith , we could make use of a holy water and a cross to chase away every Invaders.” I said and they nodded.
” This is so crazy. I barely believe in things like this , till my brother falls a victim. Your sister must be pretty , and love is really crazy.”
” I guess..” I said.
” We should take our leave .” Mrs Smith said.
” Mom you can go , I will join you soon.” Jason said and smiled at his mom.
” Alright..” Mrs Smith said and walk out.
” Can I have a word with Melissa ?”
” Yeah sure.” I said and smiled at Melissa before I left.
There’s no time for romance stuff. It seems Jason still feels a thing for Melissa.
* MELISSA *
I smiled at Jason and I chuckled to nothing in particular.
” You’re looking pretty.” He said and sits close to me.
” Thanks, it’s nice you’re back. How’s your white girlie ?” I asked.
” She’s fine. Let’s talk about you.”
” Me , I’m here where you left me. I’m still trying to move on.” I said.
He held my hand and smiled into my eyes.
” That’s cool. I’m happy you’re alive and healthy , that’s all I care about.” He said and gave me a kiss on my cheek.
I blushed and look away.
[ This is edition two , only the wise will survive.]
Is Danielle the new Jordan ?
Will Rayne really give that bracelet to his lover Danielle ?
Jason is back , Melissa is falling again..
Will Christian and Jordan survive the torment they are going through in other to come back alife ?
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